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**EDIT: okay people EVERYONE and i mean EVERYONE has been asking me "hey when are you going to finish spidey and spawn..." well okay here it is. generally i will not go back over a piece that i called done because i look back at these as learning experience and to see just how far i have came..... well this one was kinda different because when i originally posted it i was only posting to get a select few ppl input on the progress that i have gotten to sooo without further ado (what kinda word is "ado" anyways) here is the completed spidey and spawn piece i really hope those of you that requested over and over for me to complete it are happy. and listen don't be afraid of what you got to say, meaning you don't have to compose your comments in "notes" verses on the comments page its self i will not get butt hurt as they say.......

there are a few people i am going to be asking directly for their critiques because i think their skill is better than my own (at least right now hehe) but also because i am a huge fan of each and everyone of them. now that don\'t mean that you can\'t throw in your .02 cents too i would really like to hear from everyone.

for those that don\'t know me already if you want to give a critique i say this... be honest be straight forward and don\'t worry about my feelings for i truely believe that one will only get better through hard work practice and honesty from one\'s peers....

pencils by: :iconj-scott-campbell:
inks by :icontimtownsend:
colors by :iconrcardoso530:

cs4
wacom bamboo fun

other pieces i have colored by *TimTownsend
---> Spiderman [link]
---> Gambit [link]
---> uncanny xmen [link]

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I have to agree with Nei, the background in this scene has an impact on the colors used in Spidey and Spawn. At very least, a solid color in the sky and the moon will give you a better idea. For example, if you used deep blues and purples in the back, the reds would be affected and therefore not so bright.

With that being said, your coloring is okay. Spidey looks pretty flat to me though. I'd use a ton of reflections off of Spawn's glowing greeness. From the position of his hands and the fact this is at night, most of the front of Spawn would be lit. Chest, thighs, some of his cape too. Spidey's left side and the back of his right leg would be affected by it as well. All of these areas would help pop them off of the dark background without their colors looking "colorful saturated shiny".

On a final note, try using some color-holding. It would help in some areas, like the webbing and Spawn's hands and Kirby dots.

I'd finish this up if I were you, yer almost there! Great start, keep us posted!