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march hare: contest wip 002

Published: Mar 4, 2008

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here is my march hare for the contest latest version 002 .. .. been working on the background as of right now. . .still need to go back over the rabbit and clean him up before i color. . .

critique and suggestions are strongly encouraged

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twilightofmylife

Mar 7, 2008

His arms seem to be of different diameters judging by the sleeves... possibly make his left one appear bigger. Also if you are foreshortening that arm his hand is not foreshortened at the same angle. It needs to be more so that his fingers are almost pointing at the viewer. Can't quite figure out what is wrong with his right leg but it either has the knee in the wrong place or is foreshortened wrong.